#5 “Grounded”
Meanwhile, several years ago… an 11 year old Timothy Newton receives a rude awakening!
And so the story begins…
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Heh, can’t wait to see how you’ll play this one out. ^_^
You and me both! XD
Undersexed mom NEEDS THE D!
Oh lord. XD
Third strip in, even. you have my condolences XD
I’d need to see a bit more of her personality before I say anything more ;3
You’ll get to know her in time. I swear she’s a nice lady, really! :3
So I took a look at your mercy store and its all purity good I’m wondering if it’s possible to make some little figures I’m just suggesting an idea that’s all that would be cool tho if you did I would buy one instantly
Could you tell me about how, well, lewd things get in this? Or how explicit you want to make them here. Im thinking about linking this to some friends, who might disapprove of certain stuff.
The story isn’t exactly what I would call ‘explicit’. And I’ve been informed by multiple readers that the story didn’t seem to really fit in amongst it’s Neighbors, however, people still enjoyed it for what it was. The sex scenes in the story were written in a very non-graphic manner I think, and in that spirit, so shall any future scenes be in this version.
There may very possibly (more than likely) be nudity in the future, however any sex acts will be implied and indirect. I have no intention of including graphic hardcore sex in the main story arc. Take of that what you will.
Tl;dr – T&A is A-Ok!
I’m starting to wonder where you posted it first. and what its Neighbors were? Any chance of reading the Previous version?
It’s very possible, but why spoil the surprises for yourself? XD
Why not? It isn’t like foreknowledge ruins a story.
Cool, new page!
Yup! And the next one will hopefully be posted up again over the weekend. Hopefully.
Is that a picture of Scarlett on the wall in panel #1?
Ha, yeah. Just a little Easter egg. I plan on cramming as many as I can manage in over time. I already have some of Tim’s favorite comic book series “C.T.” & “V.Q.” planned out, I’m just waiting for an opportunity to sneak some references to them. Also, thanks for stopping by! 😉
very good job so far
Thanks!
Oh, it’s the same title as this. The Monster Under the Bed.
Thought I’d left this a few days back but can’t see it. I’m REALLY enjoying this strip & the concept/art behind it. But are there only these few pages so far or did I miss something. If we need to ‘register’ to view the entire strip let me know, okay? Otherwise, keep up the good work and let me know how often I should be checking in.
Thanks!
I remember you asking before too, but I’ll answer again here just for convenience sake. 😉
There is only what you see here, no hidden content, and certainly the series is far from completed, in fact it’s only just gotten under way!
You might be seeing people talking about spoilers in the comment section which has led you to believe there is a hidden treasure trove of content somewhere, and you would be half right, as this comic is based upon a short story I wrote a few years ago which some folks have read previous to me beginning to adapt the story into it’s current comic format.
Intrepid internauts may even be able to hunt it down on the web, however I refuse to disclose it’s location openly here in order to discourage any vague future spoilers. The truly possessed fan could probably find it easily enough on their own though, should they be willing to hunt it down. I myself have tested how easy it is to find in google with just a few simple key words and some quotation marks to narrow it down.
Many thanks! Sorry if I came off rude, wasn’t intended. I’d not seen a reply and my ‘name/email kept coming up with no message showing here so I assumed nothing had gotten thru. I appreciate the reply and -WILL- keep visiting to follow your very imaginative story. Would love to find the original written version (I’m not above cheating).
I wish I had a gorgeous monster goddess like the one in this story! XD
Hehe, I think that could be said of a lots of people! XD
Mom’s looking pretty damn good, isn’t she?
Continuing my attempt at righting a blind friendly script:
Panel 1:
Narrator: 10 years earlier…
Description: Tim’s mother (Ruth) slams open a door with a laundry basket under her arm. She looks angry.
Dialogue:
Ruth: *Timothy* *Newton*!
Panel 2:
Description: 8 year old Tim pushes himself away from the pillow. He looks shocked.
Dialogue:
Tim: *Gah*!
Panel 3:
Description: Focus on Ruth’s face.
Dialogue:
Ruth: And just what do you think you’re up to, young man?
Panel 4:
Description: We see Ruth from behind. Tim is sitting up in bed rubbing one of his eyes.
Dialogue:
Tim: Umm…Sleeping?
Panel 5:
Description: We see the scene from behind Tim’s head. Ruth has placed the laundry basket on the bed.
Dialogue:
Ruth: Don’t play *dumb* with me buster! This is the last straw! You’re *grounded*!
Tim: Wha…?! But mom! *Why*?!
Continuing my attempt at righting a blind friendly script:
Panel 1:
Narrator: 10 years earlier…
Description: Tim’s mother (Ruth) slams open a door with a laundry basket under her arm. She looks angry.
Dialogue:
Ruth: [shouting] *Timothy* *Newton*!
Panel 2:
Description: 8 year old Tim pushes himself away from the pillow. He looks shocked.
Dialogue:
Tim: *Gah*!
Panel 3:
Description: Focus on Ruth’s face.
Dialogue:
Ruth: And just what do you think you’re up to, young man?
Panel 4:
Description: We see Ruth from behind. Tim is sitting up in bed rubbing one of his eyes.
Dialogue:
Tim: Umm…Sleeping?
Panel 5:
Description: We see the scene from behind Tim’s head. Ruth has placed the laundry basket on the bed.
Dialogue:
Ruth: Don’t play *dumb* with me buster! This is the last straw! You’re *grounded*!
Tim: Wha…?! But mom! *Why*?!
his mom is hot
Yeah she sure is! I would not kick her out of my bed! 🙂 {I’ve got a notorious soft spot for blondes…}
Heh, I have a notorious hard spot for blondes that are soft in the right places…
Does anyone know where I can find this story for sale? I really enjoy it and I want to read it offline
It’s not for sale anywhere. It’s not even finished yet. XD
I’m re-reading this comic so I’ll remember how things came about to get to the current page. I’ll try to avoid making any comments but, if I do, I just wanted to let you to know what’s going on and why I’m commenting.
Mom’s looks have changed a bit over the last 10 years but, she IS a wee bit, uh, younger(?) in these first few pages, isn’t she?