OK if any part of this is wrong please correct it, but here is a summery for everyone whom is glazed over from the fan service. Shadow and Tim have yet it establish or confirm their relationship together. Tim has yet to get his agues to come to Nox. Nox people live in segregation. Midnight is not really “gay”, she is a horny teenager who hasn’t seen a man in years and wants to relive herself. Remember not even Shadow has slept with Tim at this point, so the idea of sleeping with a human probably never entered Midnight’s head.
And Please Please have Shadow take a picture of Marcy and Tim together. There are a lot of cameras in that house. A cat fight would be fun to watch but wouldn’t end well for anyone. If Shadow fights as a human it will make Marcy more determined to win, if she scares Marcy off as a monster, Marcy will spread rumors, if she fights as a monster rumors might spread that Tim abused her. Not will take the wind out of Marcy’s sails like Blackmail and Extortion. Marcy will want to get away from that if she thinks Tim is in on it and was playing her.
If you want one of the messier endings that’s fine but don’t pull the sappy card, where Shadow catches them at it and cries in her room for a week. That would be so out of character. She has been proactive and confrontational up to this point, don’t make her weak and sappy.
Human vs Human catfight is the only one that wont hurt the story, but Marcy trying to win Tim will make her a main character for the next 6 months. This will have a lot more going on during the day, and maybe a little less Shadow.
Interesting plot twist.
Also interesting they are making out with their tails even as Shade is refusing Middys advances.
I’ll add my voice to the threesome as vote inventive chorus. I’m guessing Mid would still rather stick her tail in a light socket than have anything sexual to do with Tim, but I think she might see the practicality in grilling him on his secrets, like how he won such devotion from Shade?
And spying on him, and them, would seem to be in character for her, digging for dirt, or watching for them to get it on so she can get her turn. I can see her letting him go first because she loves Shadow, but cant see her giving up on what she wants. At least as a teenager.
“…. how he won such devotion from Shade?”
It’s the aroma (and pheromones) of those socks Shady’s been collecting and keeping on the wall of her sleeping-place.
Yes….they are BOTH missing out.. on glorious three way that will never happen…
I want to apologize for last week. I really thought that I was going to get chewed out for that. Thank you for letting me down softly at least, and at least a few people backing me up on what they want to see… You should take it as a compliment though, you made midnight to perfect in my opinion. I love her hair, her personality, you drew her smile perfect, maybe it has to do with the skin color; I don’t know. Hope you don’t destroy her character… I clearly enjoy her character model more than Shadow. Have you seen Menat from Street Fighter 5? She reminds me of Mid. https://youtu.be/DDs6wqCZs3c must be the hair. Praise be to Bast.
And DNMZ had the same idea I had. Pretty much the only thing Midnight and Tim have in common is Shadow and it would have to be her to be the glue to put them together. Anyway if I could upvote his comment from last week I would.
A few years back you said that the main story would deviate from the original story you wrote… I was hoping this would have been one of the differences. So that explains it for my side really. And I can see that you did put in extra work in these two pages which probably set you back 3 weeks ago. Have you thought about using a 3D modeler to at least get some of the poses on point? I really do appreciate you Jive Guru-Brandon
Hey, Brandon, I was right Midnight is Gay and she got hot for shadow but shadow want to be with Tim
Sure, and yet… nah.
A Nox of wide and varied tastes.
Brandon, should the Nox girls be spellled “Noxe”?
The use of “Noxette” would be demeaning since the 1960s.
Wait aren’t they all still kids? Are they still underage?
Given that Tim now appears to be in highchool I’m assuming that they’re now in the 16-18 range
I just read this afternoon that the Republic of France just passed its first ever “age of consent” law.
In France “underage” is now 14 years or less.
What is it in Nox d’you think?
No, they’re 19 now, Brandon answered this question last week.
So they are very, “loose” as far as sex is conserned.
So basically this species cultural have a kind of Woodstock free love thing going on.
Has midnights personality changed over the years? Don’t know. Something seems different.
……. on the side because that guy on the previous page mentioned threeway this page only cements the image unintentionally for me
Alright, alright, ALRIGHT !!!
Now, make out, please.
That’s a nice boob squish in the last panel.
I like the thing they are doing with their tails
OK if any part of this is wrong please correct it, but here is a summery for everyone whom is glazed over from the fan service. Shadow and Tim have yet it establish or confirm their relationship together. Tim has yet to get his agues to come to Nox. Nox people live in segregation. Midnight is not really “gay”, she is a horny teenager who hasn’t seen a man in years and wants to relive herself. Remember not even Shadow has slept with Tim at this point, so the idea of sleeping with a human probably never entered Midnight’s head.
And Please Please have Shadow take a picture of Marcy and Tim together. There are a lot of cameras in that house. A cat fight would be fun to watch but wouldn’t end well for anyone. If Shadow fights as a human it will make Marcy more determined to win, if she scares Marcy off as a monster, Marcy will spread rumors, if she fights as a monster rumors might spread that Tim abused her. Not will take the wind out of Marcy’s sails like Blackmail and Extortion. Marcy will want to get away from that if she thinks Tim is in on it and was playing her.
If you want one of the messier endings that’s fine but don’t pull the sappy card, where Shadow catches them at it and cries in her room for a week. That would be so out of character. She has been proactive and confrontational up to this point, don’t make her weak and sappy.
Human vs Human catfight is the only one that wont hurt the story, but Marcy trying to win Tim will make her a main character for the next 6 months. This will have a lot more going on during the day, and maybe a little less Shadow.
Uh-huh. That’s bait.
Interesting plot twist.
Also interesting they are making out with their tails even as Shade is refusing Middys advances.
I’ll add my voice to the threesome as vote inventive chorus. I’m guessing Mid would still rather stick her tail in a light socket than have anything sexual to do with Tim, but I think she might see the practicality in grilling him on his secrets, like how he won such devotion from Shade?
And spying on him, and them, would seem to be in character for her, digging for dirt, or watching for them to get it on so she can get her turn. I can see her letting him go first because she loves Shadow, but cant see her giving up on what she wants. At least as a teenager.
“…. how he won such devotion from Shade?”
It’s the aroma (and pheromones) of those socks Shady’s been collecting and keeping on the wall of her sleeping-place.
These things work even while you’re asleep!
Vagina hair, big tits and a loot of hots…looks like heresy to me
(Great work Brandon!!!)
Yes….they are BOTH missing out.. on glorious three way that will never happen…
I want to apologize for last week. I really thought that I was going to get chewed out for that. Thank you for letting me down softly at least, and at least a few people backing me up on what they want to see… You should take it as a compliment though, you made midnight to perfect in my opinion. I love her hair, her personality, you drew her smile perfect, maybe it has to do with the skin color; I don’t know. Hope you don’t destroy her character… I clearly enjoy her character model more than Shadow. Have you seen Menat from Street Fighter 5? She reminds me of Mid. https://youtu.be/DDs6wqCZs3c must be the hair. Praise be to Bast.
And DNMZ had the same idea I had. Pretty much the only thing Midnight and Tim have in common is Shadow and it would have to be her to be the glue to put them together. Anyway if I could upvote his comment from last week I would.
A few years back you said that the main story would deviate from the original story you wrote… I was hoping this would have been one of the differences. So that explains it for my side really. And I can see that you did put in extra work in these two pages which probably set you back 3 weeks ago. Have you thought about using a 3D modeler to at least get some of the poses on point? I really do appreciate you Jive Guru-Brandon
so this is what took you so long…gotta get them tiddies and lesbian intentions juuust right
Genuine question, but what’s goin on with Midnights mouth in the last panel? Was it just a mistake with the fill tool or am I just stoopid.
Midnight, you useless lesbian!