There is enough material to keep this going for a while. But I don’t see how a lot of the future story lines can be padded as much as this bit, so who knows.
” Brandon reported, “Shadow’s doing a lousy job herself, attacking Marcy and leaving evidence behind!”
D’you REALLY believe that will matter to Shadow if she decides to attack Tim for breaking secrecy, doing the same thing she’s already done?
Of course, since Shadow’s not based on personalities of real girls, her behaviour in the comic MIGHT be more rational than reality would suggest.
Shadow is going to be very upset by this. This will get worse before it gets better and it will be 2022 by the time Tim and Shadow admit they love each other.
I just discovered your comic and I must say I’m really enjoying it And I’m really looking forward to when they first have sex. Not for the lewdness, the Sex scene at the end of Ai Yori Aoshi (it only happens in the manga) showed Me how beautiful and wholesome sex scenes can be. It’s not an exaggeration when I say that I have spent years trying to find a sex scene like that one. I’ve only been able to find two that meet my standards.
One is “Isekai Meikyuu De Harem O” but it’s with an asterisk. Visually the sex scene in chapter 12 is almost perfect Unfortunately it falls apart when you add in the context that they’re a sex slave and master.
The other one is a hentai called “I brought home a succubus who failed to find a job” (there’s also a pg version). While the visuals are cartoonishly stupid the dialogue and visuals right before the sex scenes is amazing. Maybe you could use these for reference.
This is a personal preference but something I’ve noticed over the years is that when you do with sex scenes you don’t want to have it be like a slide show (like The one at the very beginning of the comic was). You want to let us hear the thoughts of the characters and not just from one perspective you want to let us hear the thoughts of both characters. Maybe have them explore each others bodies and they discover something about the other that they didn’t notice before. You want to make it slow paced and should write it with the intent of people going through the whole thing in one go as opposed to reading just one page at a time
This might surprise people but I have never successfully drawn a sex scene before between any two people.
I mostly just do pin-ups, so this whole thing is a bit nerve-wracking for me. I hope that since everyone has hyped it up in their heads for years they aren’t horribly disappointed when it turns out super clumsy and basic. I’ve gotta really bring my A-game. It may take WEEKS to get right.
I personally find it better when it doesnt show genitals so that it can focus more on their faces. Well i like to binge webcomics so i’ll see you again in about a year.
I know you told us frequently that it is a part time for you, not paid and only for fun. Recently, because there is hollidays, it was not every two weeks but every three weeks instead and that made me sad and sad that we cannot have more pages. Especially, I hope that, due to hollidays, you would have more time just to share your fun with everyone with a new page.
Anyway, I simply did not understand what is this book, Is that the magic book with which Ruth and Shadow are able to change forms or any other book ?
So they took pictures… Well I haven’t seen that coming but it makes sense… However if I were Shadow, if Tim had shown some pictures of myself to stranger, I would have been felt betrayed.. So pay attention Tim to your doom…
IIRC there is a book that was before the comic. I know there was I found it once, but having started with the comic I just never got into the text. For the life of me I cannot find it now though.
It’s on his blog page. Hint – add “-Brandon” when searching, his name is something else.
Don’t know why he doesn’t link to his blog. Also note that the text version is almost an outline, the whole Halloween story line was one sentence. The web comic is much more filled out. At the current rate, there is enough material in it to keep this going another 30 years.
Me, the truth is I met this comic at the beginning of 2020 and the truth is that I love how it develops the story, the characters, the drawing style, etc. I am surprised that I went from simply reading the comic and now, until I spent about 3 hours formulating a theory of exactly when events in history happen, (which led me to think that the history of the present occurs between 2006 and 2008, and the children between 1996 and 1998) I also recommended the comic to a friend and being honest he liked it a lot.
So Brandon, please keep it up, the comic is going great (in my opinion) and it’s totally worth the wait to see a new page almost every Sunday.
First. Also, I’m guessing that book Timothy’s holding has pictures of him and Shadow? Looking forward to Tim and Shadow’s reunion.
Soon. (By their time, anyhow)
Hopefully everything will go alright.
Will I be able to live up to this or will my grandchildren see it?
There is enough material to keep this going for a while. But I don’t see how a lot of the future story lines can be padded as much as this bit, so who knows.
You’re right, starting next chapter things start get much more pointed and start drifting towards a sort of end game.
The build up part is almost over!
pictures won’t work, remember. They will be blurred to the other two.
If he’s talking about her openly, I can see why he was scratched.
He did promise to keep her a secret after all.
Shadow’s doing a lousy job herself, attacking Marcy and leaving evidence behind!
The truth will set them free! Anger will come, things will be said and truths revealed! This is the push they have needed!
The push named Marcy Weaver!
MOOOOWHAHAHAHABAHAHAAA!
” Brandon reported, “Shadow’s doing a lousy job herself, attacking Marcy and leaving evidence behind!”
D’you REALLY believe that will matter to Shadow if she decides to attack Tim for breaking secrecy, doing the same thing she’s already done?
Of course, since Shadow’s not based on personalities of real girls, her behaviour in the comic MIGHT be more rational than reality would suggest.
She’s a character in a comic book that I made up, of course I know how she’s going to react. Every character IS me.
Uh oh, Brandon over here claiming pantheism in his world XD
Haha, I am the god and these characters are my toys. Mwahaha!
Megalomania much?
I’m sorry, am I stepping on *your* toes? Haha
Lol
(Clutches chest) OOOOooooo my heart!!!! AAAAAaah!!!!
That’s supposed to be kept as a secret! Now everyone knows Brandon has a side that likes to sneak under beds and sniff used socks 😲😨😵
Hah, no, not really… but every idea did come from somewhere in my weird brain.
I’ll say it now, I’m not blind, but Brandon, every time you draw, you’re honing your skills, that’s amazing.
cheers for brandon👏👏👏👏👏
Is he really gonna tell them that easily? Is Shadow gonna be alright? all they become friends after a few pages and/or chapters?
You’ll probably know by 2025.
Shadow is going to be very upset by this. This will get worse before it gets better and it will be 2022 by the time Tim and Shadow admit they love each other.
MwahahahaHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAAAA!
Lol I can’t tell if this is because I’m wrong or because you’re enjoying how this upsets everyone
Yes
Are we going to stick with Tim and co. for a bit? Or are we heading back to Nox next page?
We get to see a bit of the inside of the book for a bit, then we shall join the Nox girls for their big scene.
I just discovered your comic and I must say I’m really enjoying it And I’m really looking forward to when they first have sex. Not for the lewdness, the Sex scene at the end of Ai Yori Aoshi (it only happens in the manga) showed Me how beautiful and wholesome sex scenes can be. It’s not an exaggeration when I say that I have spent years trying to find a sex scene like that one. I’ve only been able to find two that meet my standards.
One is “Isekai Meikyuu De Harem O” but it’s with an asterisk. Visually the sex scene in chapter 12 is almost perfect Unfortunately it falls apart when you add in the context that they’re a sex slave and master.
The other one is a hentai called “I brought home a succubus who failed to find a job” (there’s also a pg version). While the visuals are cartoonishly stupid the dialogue and visuals right before the sex scenes is amazing. Maybe you could use these for reference.
This is a personal preference but something I’ve noticed over the years is that when you do with sex scenes you don’t want to have it be like a slide show (like The one at the very beginning of the comic was). You want to let us hear the thoughts of the characters and not just from one perspective you want to let us hear the thoughts of both characters. Maybe have them explore each others bodies and they discover something about the other that they didn’t notice before. You want to make it slow paced and should write it with the intent of people going through the whole thing in one go as opposed to reading just one page at a time
o.O I just hope I can draw it decently.
This might surprise people but I have never successfully drawn a sex scene before between any two people.
I mostly just do pin-ups, so this whole thing is a bit nerve-wracking for me. I hope that since everyone has hyped it up in their heads for years they aren’t horribly disappointed when it turns out super clumsy and basic. I’ve gotta really bring my A-game. It may take WEEKS to get right.
wrong Terminus and Anna were quite in finishing stuff if I may say…. earlier in the chapter.
Well, yes I can draw people sitting on other people… I’m talking like a SEX SCENE. You know? Dicks and Pussies and stuff.
I’ve only drawn like 2 dicks in my life. Haha.
Does it really need to be that graphic? You’ve said yourself that this isn’t a porn comic, so you could just let your readers’ imagination take over.
No, it probably won’t… but there will be a huge section of folks who will be disappointed if it doesn’t show something though.
I personally find it better when it doesnt show genitals so that it can focus more on their faces. Well i like to binge webcomics so i’ll see you again in about a year.
super clumsy and basic, is every ones first time.. so yea that works 😉
No, the next excursion will probably be a side-step to Anna, her abductors and (maybe) Terminus.
Nah, that plotline is over for this chapter. I’ll have to remind everyone again who Anna is by the time we get back around to her again… probably.
It happens every time at least once; or else people confuse her for Marcy or Ruth somehow (both situations have happened!)
Wait… doesn’t keeping a scrapbook negate the whole tear up the picture bit from when they first met?
She fixed it and gave it back to him for his birthday. he put it in that drawer for safe keeping.
Was that in a comic im forgetting about or was that offscreen?
https://themonsterunderthebed.net/?comic=100-something-special
I know you told us frequently that it is a part time for you, not paid and only for fun. Recently, because there is hollidays, it was not every two weeks but every three weeks instead and that made me sad and sad that we cannot have more pages. Especially, I hope that, due to hollidays, you would have more time just to share your fun with everyone with a new page.
Anyway, I simply did not understand what is this book, Is that the magic book with which Ruth and Shadow are able to change forms or any other book ?
It’s a photo album.
So they took pictures… Well I haven’t seen that coming but it makes sense… However if I were Shadow, if Tim had shown some pictures of myself to stranger, I would have been felt betrayed.. So pay attention Tim to your doom…
Does the comic have a text version? Like a book
IIRC there is a book that was before the comic. I know there was I found it once, but having started with the comic I just never got into the text. For the life of me I cannot find it now though.
It’s on his blog page. Hint – add “-Brandon” when searching, his name is something else.
Don’t know why he doesn’t link to his blog. Also note that the text version is almost an outline, the whole Halloween story line was one sentence. The web comic is much more filled out. At the current rate, there is enough material in it to keep this going another 30 years.
Somehow, I get the feeling that these two will end up becoming his friends in keeping this secret.
Yeah, I also suspect this will go completely unrealistically.
Have you guys seen E.T.? A whole family keeps an alien secret and they aren’t exactly on the same page when the movie begins. It works out though.
…..and SOME of the pages might be stuck together.
Tim, don’t show those pages to Marcy (although Craig may understand but will use the evidence against you).
Me, the truth is I met this comic at the beginning of 2020 and the truth is that I love how it develops the story, the characters, the drawing style, etc. I am surprised that I went from simply reading the comic and now, until I spent about 3 hours formulating a theory of exactly when events in history happen, (which led me to think that the history of the present occurs between 2006 and 2008, and the children between 1996 and 1998) I also recommended the comic to a friend and being honest he liked it a lot.
So Brandon, please keep it up, the comic is going great (in my opinion) and it’s totally worth the wait to see a new page almost every Sunday.
I just noticed the book Tim is holding is dark grey and red, similar to Shadow. Coincidence?