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The Monster Under the Bed
“Embrace your fear.”
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Oughta be a tight fit under that bed.
One question, uh Brandon, is it me or does the Spanish version of tmutb outperform the original? , I know that I am very used to my language but when I read it in English I feel that it does not have the same as in Spanish since it does not have ….. how would I say it (dramatization) for example the only thing it has is a cry a yes or a no and nothing else, well that is surely because in different languages there are changes although yes, if I told you which one is better I would say that in Spanish The version is very good also for a moment that I can say that I am telling the truth About that and what I am going to say is without offending or anything bad is in 171 where it says Shadow (who cares about that) and this is the pronunciation it has and it is the same but in Spanish (a quien le importa eso). Ok
I’m pretty sure you think the spanish version is better…. because that is your native language! I have no idea personally.
i already understood, it must be because you still do not understand spanish much, well, something is something and the truth is that i really like the comic in all the ways it is seen, well in other news, it is known recently that it is already here the new editor that is in charge of making the animation video of the fandubs of …. you know who i mean on youtube that i showed you about a month ago, and if i give you a date when the big premiere will be, it would be for halloween or later since many problems arose here but they are being solved so when that time comes i will inform you immediately and share it here.
Tbh, I haven’t read it in Spanish, which is also my native language. However, and as a professional interpreter and translator, I feel worried about the way many translators ’embellish’ other’s works, perhaps because they feel the original lacks expressions or emotions that are proper of their culture. I feel better when cultural traits of real human world are kept unchanged according to the cultural group depicted (hispanics behaving like hispanics, asians as asians and yankees… well, just look at Trump and followers)…
“Let me take you down, ’cause I’m going to…”
Please tell me that isn’t shadow’s diary filled with pages on how good Tim’s socks smell
Don’t lie to me
Please let it be a normal storybook
you know, if this were to get an anime i imagine that the opening would have similar tone to Chibi Vampire https://www.dailymotion.com/video/x7na2w4 (skip to 00:30 see the opening)
It probably would have several of those common elements in there, yeah. Standing back to back while we get the typical head shots of characters turning to look at the camera. Maybe cut back on the straight-up nudity though. Subtly, you know?
the image of the moon in a blood red sky while slightly creepy music plays would also work perfectly. Even some of the same lyrics would work. “The moonlight shines golden on the side of your face” can be applied here. Don’t think Shadow is shy enough to try that perspective deceiving faux kiss that’s at the beginning of the opening though. (ive actually never seen anything similar to that done since)
Tim didn’t miss a beat with that one lol.
I recently found out that you are planning after this comic is done you are going to do a princess themed superhero comic.
With this being your character portraits: https://pbs.twimg.com/media/D-sRgoYWkAAJPDj.jpg
Now, there is a very high chance you won’t listen to me, but if you do go ahead and do that. I feel you should go the full Kekko Kamen route and have them be essentially nude when “suited up”.
Basically I would keep the card faces theme,
but remove the skirt-thong,
give them a mask similar to Mika from Street Fighter but have the holes shaped like their symbol,
move the ribbon bow that was on their butts to their upper backs.
And remove the symbol covering their breasts to their navels and shrink them so it only covers their navels.
Then keep the thigh high boots, the arm coverings, their tiaras, thus leaving their privates exposed.
Story wise, it could be their super powers only work if their privates are exposed, similar to how Superman canonically will lose his powers if his skin doesn’t absorb enough sun light.
I also would give them knee pads and elbow pads with their symbols on them, but, whatever.
– P.S. I didn’t send this over Twitter because I don’t have one and didn’t want to make one just to make this post. Feel free just to reply “that idea is stupid” or whatever.
I’m now just picturing them as Naked Ladies in Ninja Turtle costumes… with Angel wings Haha. It may be a BIT too, um, “gratuitious” for what I’m actually planning that potential series to be like. It will certainly be T+A-centric, and typically have a ton of clothes-ripping action (potentially!) but there’ll be some subtlety to it! Haha.
Their costumes being super revealing is almost the joke of it, even the girls will call it out at first. I even have a joke about how their faces are not even disguised already worked into the lore. I’m going to be poking fun at a lot of sentai/magical girl tropes.
Having them just be naked is sort of missing the point. I don’t need to hit people over the head with it, and to me, leaving a little to the imagination is way better than just blunt nudity.
I AM very happy that several of you are into this new idea though, even enough to dedicate any amount of effort or thought of your own into it! 🙂
On the opposite end of projects you have done. Is there a video tutorial on how to make a website the same as this one?
Currently the only tutorials I can find are these odd slide galleries where you instead press to the left or right of the image instead of on the image were all images are loaded at once. And I don’t want that.
WAY off topic from any kinky stuff, I want to use the website to make comics and lore based on my own thing that is basically a cross between the SCP Foundation and X-Men with most stuff I have right now are just characters with no story or a few comics that are very depressing.
WordPress + Comicpress plug-in. That’s all I know really. I didn’t really make this website, it’s just a template with some custom art for the header. I don’t know the technical nitty-gritty of it.
Thank you. That is actually what I wanted to know. Most tutorials and things did just use plug-ins but all had this odd slide gallery like what Fandom Wikia uses were everything is loaded all at once.
Now, would you know a site were I could go on and just spit-fire dumb ideas to see what people’s opinions are on them?
Like for about two years now, I have had an idea of making two versions of the same web comic with the same story, characters, plot, and so on. But have one version be full of a fetish called CMNF (Clothed Male, Nude Female) and plot wise have it explained that do to the intelligent monsters roaming the world, thus any laws made apply to them, it is “impossible” to make a clothing law that requires anything more than the male genitalia to be covered. In tern, females picked up on being always nude as a fashion statement to tease the males. I don’t have much for an actual plot right now, though.
Maybe twitter? It’s pretty good for shooting out random dumb ideas!
Wait, isn’t that what Kill la Kill is about? Superpowers that depend on being as nude as possible?
Sort of!
This is in my opinion, an amazing comic with an amazing storyline and great characters that you really connect with. I am very excited for what is coming net!
une version traduite en français existe , si non est elle prévue?
Probably, try google! Everyone else is doing unofficial versions in their own languages. I don’t keep track.
Considering the fact you live in Ontario as you said, you probably also speak French, don’t you ? In that case, if a French translation is presented to you, would you check it and, if this translation corresponds to your quality standards, would you endorse it ?
I don’t speak French fluently at all. I can understand a very tiny, little bit of French I picked up over the years.
Brandon I found this place where possibly all the translations of your comic are, it is in Chinese still incomplete, Russian very incomplete, German still incomplete, Spanish is the one with the crown in the translations (above Spain xd I don’t know why I said that, the custom) but it seems that this will be the case, and there is also the version without text (I think I will use this to give it my own environment and words of mine), the truth is that here is the link, they are only the ones with your name, the rest are by other artists and maybe it’s time to see how far the comic has come. … for almost everyone, although many other adaptations to all languages would be missing, although this is what I found, do not ask ….. just say it.
https://e-hentai.org/?f_search=the+monster+under+the+bed&advsearch=1&f_sname=on&f_stags=on&f_spf=&f_spt=
Do you know when the next one is coming out
yes
Hehehehe (snigger) who better?
Question, what weaponry or weapons do the Noxians have? for this I divide it into three categories. the first is in primitive weapons like spears or knives. the latter are firearms such as pistols or lethal weapons. and the third would be weapons of mass destruction, such as weapons of destruction for towns, cities, or possibly worlds.
They have claws, mostly.
They probably have things like knives/daggers and spears or staves. They don’t have guns, and they definitely don’t have bombs.
unbelievable, their armaments are none.
It will be easier for them, I just hope they don’t alter the timeline too much…
And Scissors, apparently
They clearly used to have high tech. It’s like they are the remains of a collapsed society, or perhaps a colony that lost contact with their original home, possibly on purpose.
That makes logical sense, I also like that were discussing random facts at the edge of the known cannon for a relatively unknown comic
m̶a̶g̶i̶c̶ sufficiently advanced technology?
Are you kidding? WTF?
You should make a clean version to publish. I’d buy it.
I’ll just publish the wicked unclean version with some boobs. More people will buy it! 😅
“I would like–er, if I may–to take you on a strange journey…” 😎
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=ncFcwSduHwI
I mean, technically, this is what Tim has been doing for the entire comic! He’s telling us all the story of how he met Shadow and the crazy stuff that happened along the way.
Now he’s telling other people a story, WITHIN the story! Storyception!
Question uh Brandon, the cookie that Shadow eats in Tim’s trap,
What is it or what does it have?
I’m saying I thought it was a chocolate chip cookie, but it looks like it isn’t … or maybe it is.