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The Monster Under the Bed
“Embrace your fear.”
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Weird, I made a short story about a teen couple’s first time… Granted, it didn’t go the way yours is gonna go. Had to cut out the naughty bits because mine is a teen series, but it’s odd how we both kinda lined up at the same point at almost the same time…
Oh, and don’t think I didn’t notice that this totally counts as makeup sex.
Indeed.
I miss when webcomics could just do whatever they wanted.
Agreed… :/
You were forced to or “forced to”?
And so it begins…..
Well… I hope you will not cancel what’s about to come, like many creators do in this situations.
Soooo much this!
Ugh, I know! I freaking hate that cliche!
And this is the moment when mom barges in to have the important talk, right?
This is when she barges in with the cookies and milk and condominium and dad falls off the roof with a pair of binoculars in his right hand.
Yasssss Queen
I’m predicting someone’s going to interrupt their moment. Probably Terminus or Ruth. Either way, it’s going to be awkward and/or worrying.
Someone, quick, put on the Barry White!
I really LIKE where this is going!
That first panel looked a little different in my mind, I thought we’d flashed forward to her pregnant or something XD
So i’m not alone on that! Good to know. lol
A sign maybe? 😮
Anyone else notice that red dot outside the window in the last panel? I bet that’s someone watching them.
Just gonna say that
That red dot was in the page where Shadow told Tim how Terminus proposed to her. But like you guys, I do believe the red dot means that someone is watching Tim and Shadow.
Also how would Terminus already know where Tim lived? Only talked to shadow for like 30 seconds. Plus I think terminus and nightmare are going to have a serious problem
The same way as Midnight: by shadowing Shadow.
It’s just part of the photograph I use as the outside of Tim’s window.
That means no one is watching Tim and Shadow. But that be no reason to rest easy. You said so yourself that others will find out about their relationship, and that will lead to trouble. Or, as you put it, BIG TROUBLE. I wonder who exactly would pose a threat to them, though…
Er… how so?
Well, Terminus and Nightmare come to mind. They need a hybrid to open the door to the core. And I think the organization that kidnapped Anna is either prejudiced against Noxians or want to experiment on them.
Noah Copeland and Wes noticed a red dot on the window in the last panel, and they think someone is watching Tim and Shadow. What do you guys think?
It’s in the right place to be a porch light.
Hungry eyes.
What do you guys think Chapter 5 will be called? There is still a lot left
Oh! I know! I know!
According to a twitter post, the acronym for the next chapter is “S.I.Y.L.” Anyone got any guesses for what that could stand for?
Thanks for the page.
Tim seems to have things well in hand, so to speak.
😀
I can’t believe I forgot to read this until today!
I have to say that I’m definitely on board with your approach of slow tenderness with a little bit of familiar banter, as opposed to the the steamy, ‘dress drop out of nowhere’ that often seems to happen with these scenes. It’s certainly more in character for the two.
As much as I (like several other commenters) think that they’re going to be interrupted, I hope that they aren’t.
Yup.. Sometimes a buildup is nice… and going from what we have seen of the future,…. that dress will be falling soon enough. lol