#7 “Rats!”
“What? I’m sorry Tim, were you saying something?”
Welp, straight up telling them his thoughts on the matter didn’t work. Typical. It looks as if Tim’s gotta get some hard evidence now.
I wonder how that’ll go?
Oh yeah, and with this page we’re officially introduced to Tim’s parents, Thomas & Ruth Newton!
Man! I’m just loving this art style XD! I can’t wait when Tim meets the demon girl for the first time.
Soon… Soon… *strokes a fluffy white cat*
But seriously, thank you!
Hey man awesome story so far. really enjoying the art style seeing as it is different to others i’ve seen. i originally found out about wordpress comics from CnC and ive been following it for some time, so since Jim is behind you, i’m looking forward to see how this continues 🙂 btw, when would you suggest my looking for your ‘old story’ (if at all) i’m curious about what it is about but you have said it gives away spoilers so i was wondering if you could tell me how long i’ll have to wait until the spoilers should be past 😛
Thanks for stopping by! Glad you’re enjoying the ride so far, short as it is!
Well, the old story is just that. It’s THIS story from beginning to end, only I wrote it about two-ish years ago now. It’s 6 chapters long and 61,920 words long. So, it’s sort of like one long, gigantic spoiler. This comic won’t be an exact adaptation, of course, but the brush strokes are all in there so to speak. So, you’ll have to wait until this comic is finished it’s telling of that story and moves onto the sequel’s events to really avoid any spoilers.
Ah ok sure i was just wondering about the other story and i’m happy to just follow along with eveyone else with this one, seeing as how great it is so far.
Huh it is REALLY a coincidence that two people in a row said basically the same thing. well apparently we must think it’s true (keep checking just to make sure he isn’t there :P)
Hello, there I love this comic so far. I loved and am enjoying the art style seeing as it is different to others i’ve seen. I found this comics from CnC links page and I been following, from page two now. So since Jim is behind you I am wondering if your JiveGuru that I seen on CNC maybe. Also i’m looking forward to see how this continues 🙂 Thanks again for making this fun comic to read.
Jim is behind me? *Looks behind me* Nope, I’m safe, for now! XD It’s funny, you’re the second person in a row to say you’ve come from that direction and tell me Jim is behind me. I’m paranoid now! 😉 Just kidding!
Thanks for keeping up with my comic! I’m glad it’s going over quite well. 🙂
JiveGuru? I missed him again? Oh, that handsome devil. I’ll get him someday! I’ve got a bone to pick with that dude! >.<
JiveGuru, where? *looks around*
Still, looks like it’s time to play a game of mouse trap.
Actually, you’re not far off! 😉
To be honest, I was never that big a fan of Mouse Trap, it always took a long time to set up and the actual game was never as fun as springing the trap.
That’s okay, I’ve never actually played the game myself anyway.
Hey, if my parents were being like this, I’d sleep with a cute monster girl ten years later, too.
Hah. Yeah, it’s all their fault really. ;-P
and this attitude is why kids don’t trust their parents >:P
I know! XD Don’t you hate when they do that?
Hey really love it so far. It is a wholly unique idea and cannot wait to see more.
Thank you kindly sir! *salute*
am not mad I tell u the rats did it the rats did it you hear I prove it I swear am not mad ,….. no mum I keep telling you the gnomes stole my pants ok I prove that to ….. can I have a cookie
Well, 2 pages ago she does burst into his room yelling “This is the last straw!” so he must get up to mischief now and then, right? Hehe.
Oh, hey!
Just wanted to tell you that this comic is amazing) I really love the style, it’s so playful.
Thank you very much!
Well, I would try and avoid spoilers, but if you’d really like to read the original… I can point you in the right direction.
Nice new page, Keep it up!
Thanks! I shall endeavour to do my very best to acquiesce your suggestion! 😉
Hey Brandon so glad to see you added some more
Can’t what to see the rest of the comic and I just like to say
That for a thing your doing on your free time its very impressive like Hades says on Hercules two thumbs waaaayyyy
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Thank you very much! Well, I figure since I’ve got my name attached to it, it had better be as good as I can manage at the time.
I think that even though there will be sex I think it does not have to be under the xxx category
But its still vary good “raises a glass” here’s hoping that even when its done you will keep making the comic maybe
A after story where they are adults and we get to see how they live as a married couple
No, no. Any sex in this will mostly be pretty tasteful, well, hopefully! Not that there won’t be some nudity now and then. I just won’t be going fully hardcore during the love scenes.
And I do plan on carrying on after even the events told in Monster On My Mind. I’ve got plans!
If it is possible I would love to read the original story?
Yeah, it’s possible. Check your email!
Man I fucking wanna see the rest of the story i cant wait.
Continue Man you’re realy good 😀
Thank you!
You are a lazy villain! Wings not “pretty useless”, it just “pretty cute things”. I know about i say.
Actually, they were pretty useless. They never used them and they had no opportunity to use them.
Personally I enjoy the change. Sorry friend.
Nope. They uses them. Every day, every hour, every second of a their whole life. They can’t fly, but it not means, that they not used their wings. I feel sorrow for it if you can’t see it in yourself story. Also, them have some exploit beyond showed in story(well, now i don’t see them yet).
P.s. i hope that you can understand me through my totally illiteracy.
Buuuut, in this version they have never had wings in the first place, so they won’t even know to miss them.
I know in the story they DID use them, mostly as an extension of a shrug, or (perhaps the one way I will miss using them) a hug. But don’t feel bad. Even though their wings are no more, the characters are still very much the same.
But you lazy anyway. Also wing with lenght about 1 metre(in OS they about 1-1.4 metre) still enough for fight. Not for primary damage, but useful for distraction.
Hey, I work really hard on this project! I’m not lazy.
I got rid of the wings because I wanted to. I didn’t like them anymore.
I’m sorry if you don’t like it, but I just can’t please everyone.
Christmas break is here, rev up those pages Brandon!
Merry Christmas and best of luck!
Heh, well, it’s not exactly here for me quite yet. Though I am glad for the weekend!
Oh yeah, Canada I think? Well, Merry Early Christmas, and take your time with those pages! Hehe.
Thanks! I’m certainly hoping to get lots done during my holidays, though as with all best laid plans… we’ll have to see!