Sunset is rather brightly coloured for a monster of the darkness. On that note, her name has oddly nice imagery considering she’s surrounded by names like Nightmare, Shadow, Gloom, etc.
And she’s also the apparent tomboy of the group… do I taste irony?
My apologies for the incomplete thought but wanted to mention alot of hand movement this time, small details that keep bringing me back to the site over the week.
You know, I just realized something. All the monsters are brightly colored – Mother Moonlight is white, Nightmare is deep red, Sunset is bright orange, Midnight is deep blue, Gloom is bright Cyan. And Shadow….. is grey. Like the absence of color. Like she doesn’t fit in with everyone else. Well done, Brandon sir. Your subtlety continues to impress.
With that out of the way, you need to have a patreon. I know others have said the same thing, but you need to do this, so I can throw money at you to help you write this thing so I can eventually get a dead tree copy of your comic. 🙂
Aaww her face in the last frame, maybe she not a meanie after all. Wonder wats she will be doin within the next couple pages. Cant wait till next week, awsome work by the way love the scene
Might I also ask how we private message you so to show fan art, because I don’t have a face book and I really don’t won’t to mak it just for one thing so if you could help me that be great.
Man, Nightmare is really well drawn in the 3rd panel, it looks very dynamic with her hair lifting a bit from whipping around suddenly.
Yeah, she turned out well!
Who’s the guy?
What guy? XD
Okay, who’s the vaguely-masculine-looking guy?
You mean the least overtly feminine girl? The orange one?
Ahh, you’re talking about Sunset. *Her* name is on the page, you know? XD
My typing has been lousy of late: should’a typed “girl” when I typed “guy.”
I had the yellowhairy one in mind—looks flatchested.
Hah, well, they all are, mostly. Maybe just starting to develop something.
Maybe it’s more the butch haircut.
Heh, okay, you’re not into Sunset. I understand! XD
Sunset is rather brightly coloured for a monster of the darkness. On that note, her name has oddly nice imagery considering she’s surrounded by names like Nightmare, Shadow, Gloom, etc.
And she’s also the apparent tomboy of the group… do I taste irony?
Their mother is pure white, so they can come in all colours.
This is fair.
I want to pinch Gloom’s cheeks. What a cutie!
Heh Heh. Yeah, both these girls have kinda grown on me since I randomly made them up a while back. XD
I’ve still got my fingers crossed for a group shot of Mother’s current Bed Bugs troop 😀
It’s a good idea, I’ll grant you that!
Hahaha, love it as usual, and the third panel is tops. I can’t help but think that Gloom’s tail-end looks like a company logo though. =P
I want to begin by thanking you for posting the line art to these 2 last pages.
Love the tail designs, reminds me of aces, diamonds, spades, and hearts from a deck of cards.
Curious. When the sun is setting and it’s turning gold and purple. I call that the “golden hour”.
I see more personality in your two background characters over Nightmare.
I never noticed the hands till now, 4 digets. I’m of the 3 digets on the feets.
Time for her to meet her bed buddy.
I am aware of the toes*
My apologies for the incomplete thought but wanted to mention alot of hand movement this time, small details that keep bringing me back to the site over the week.
Well, whatever it is, I’m glad you keep coming back!
Is it bad that I find Nightmare attractive? Cause I sure am attracted. Ooh la la~
No, not necessarily. 😉
That isn’t the issue here. I wouldn’t get close.
Shes is gonna catch Shadow and Tim together (as friends get ur mind out of the gutter) and tell on Mother or use blackmail or something
Maybe!
Maybe!
You know, I just realized something. All the monsters are brightly colored – Mother Moonlight is white, Nightmare is deep red, Sunset is bright orange, Midnight is deep blue, Gloom is bright Cyan. And Shadow….. is grey. Like the absence of color. Like she doesn’t fit in with everyone else. Well done, Brandon sir. Your subtlety continues to impress.
With that out of the way, you need to have a patreon. I know others have said the same thing, but you need to do this, so I can throw money at you to help you write this thing so I can eventually get a dead tree copy of your comic. 🙂
Haha, well fine. I’m certainly leaning towards it these days.
Or a skin for your iPhone or tablet. That would be cool. Could sell it at Comiket http://www.comiket.co.jp/index_e.html
Well, the colours are in the name, I suppose.
Her color scheme is more reminiscent of the male monsters we’ve seen than the females, imo. I wonder what her mom looked like *cough cough*
She’s probably a milf, too. 😉
Aaww her face in the last frame, maybe she not a meanie after all. Wonder wats she will be doin within the next couple pages. Cant wait till next week, awsome work by the way love the scene
Thanks! Yes, there’s more to Nightmare than being a total bitch… but give it time.
Another end-page. Once-a-week webcomics sure are slow to progress.
Oh well. Are those odd shoulderpads part of some of the robes?
The shoulder spikes are probably there to make their silhouette look more menacing, since they spend their time scaring people and all.
Yeah, that. It’s to make them look more threatening.
Yet the only one wearing them there is the least threatening of all of them.
Exactly my point. Shadow has them too on her cloak. Coincidence?
Yeah, cute hair buns and cute chubby cheeks does not a scary monster make.
I wonder what Gloom’s preferred method of scaring the humans is.
It’s all in the presentation, really. They all are too cute to be really scary. This is why they work best in the shadows.
Just read all of the comic up to this point and I have to say… I have too many webcomics to read! lol, xD
What should be the ship name for shadow and Tim
I’m honestly not sure how that would work in this case.
ShaTim.
Yeah! I’m lovin’ Sunset! I have always had a thing for masculine ladies with short butch haircuts. Great work, Brandon!
She’s not THAT masculine… XD
i’ve just got to say, this comic and idea is great and you should keep going. Who knows one day this might get a animated adaptation.
Haha, that’d be nice! Thank you!
Might I also ask how we private message you so to show fan art, because I don’t have a face book and I really don’t won’t to mak it just for one thing so if you could help me that be great.
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Remove the spaces. Or post it up on an image sharing service/gallery and send me a link.