#9 “Eyes in the Dark”
I think he’s going to need a bigger mousetrap for this one!
Phew! It looks like the new page is finally finished! You know, going into Christmas holidays, I figured I would have lots of time to sit and crank out a few pages… hah! Boy, was I wrong! Anyhow, sorry about the slight delay everyone, but as you all can imagine life stuff seems to pre-empt everything else this time of year.
Oh! And have a Happy New Year!
With teeth like that, let’s hope she never goes down on him.
Where there’s a will, there’s a way.
Continuing my attempt at righting a blind friendly script:
#9 “Eyes in the Dark”
Panel 1:
Description: Tim is lying in bed asleep.
Sound effect: Chomp
Panel 2:
Description: Tim is lying in bed but wide awake.
Young Shadow (off panel): Mmm…!
Sound effect: Crunch crunch crunch
Panel 3:
Description: Focus on the bedside table. Tim’s hand reaches for the camera.
Sound effect: Crunch crunch crunch
Panel 4:
Description: Tim is sitting up in bed holding the polaroid camera. To our right (his left) he’s left the socks with cookies on top on the floor. To the right of that Shadow is crouched down and is eatin a cookie.
Tim: What the *hell*…?!
Sound effect: Crunch
Panel 5:
Description: Focus on Shadow’s face. Her mouth is open and she looks angry.
Shadow: Hisssssssss!
Panel 6:
Description: Focus on Tim. He looks shocked and is holding the camera. The flash is on.
No dialogue
She was trying to eat cookies that were practically lying on the floor. Do these monsters have no such thing as hygiene?
Or human food is so delicious compared to food from her world? Or poor thing never gets enough food in her world and
constantly hungry?
Nonono! All wrong! You’re supposed to throw a Pokéball at her!
Without even trying to weaken her?
Lmfao