#7 “Rats!”
“What? I’m sorry Tim, were you saying something?”
Welp, straight up telling them his thoughts on the matter didn’t work. Typical. It looks as if Tim’s gotta get some hard evidence now.
I wonder how that’ll go?
Oh yeah, and with this page we’re officially introduced to Tim’s parents, Thomas & Ruth Newton!
Just don’t say that they “pretty useless” and all will be ok.
P.s. can’t find “reply” button near last your post.
really love it so far, very intriguing!
Thank you!
Unlike the other things i have read this comic seems really interesting and seems like it knows what its doing
Thank you! I do have a plan (with some wiggle room) let’s just hope I don’t mess it up somehow! XD
I’d be honestly surprised if he doesn’t have siblings.
His parents are both hotties.
Continuing my attempt at righting a blind friendly script:
#7 “Rats!”
Panel 1:
Description: Tim’s father (Thomas) and Ruth are seated around a dining table with food on their plates. They both look in good humour.
Dialogue:
Thomas: So, *rats* are stealing your socks, huh?
Ruth: I think you’re *dreaming*, kiddo.
Panel 2:
Description: Focus on Tim. He’s waving his arms.
Dialogue:
Tim: *Nah-uh*! I’ve heard them *scratching*!
Panel 3:
Description: We see all three of them around the table. Tim has his arms on the table and looks annoyed. His parents are still in good humour. Ruth’s hand is on the pepper pot.
Dialogue:
Thomas: Ruthie dear, can you please pass the pepper?
Ruth: Why *certainly*, Thomas darling.
Panel 4:
Description: All three are around the table. Tim looks angry. His parents look shocked.
Dialogue:
Tim: [shouting] *Fine* *then*! I’ll just have to *prove* it to you myself!
After reading what is current in the comic so far, I think I might have to readjust my thinking a little. Ruth’s face is the face of someone thinking
“Oh shit! It’s happening again. I have to do something.”
After the revelation of page #143, the looks on their faces in the last panel conveys a different thought running through their heads.